FL
Firstname Lastname
May 30, 2025 11:44 PM
Hi My Brand Package Team,
I’m working on a new free mini-course called Magnetic Messaging, designed to help creators quickly clarify their brand message and connect more deeply with their audience. I’d like a one-page website designed to promote and deliver the course, with a focus on clean design, clarity, and strong conversion.
Here’s what I need included:
Headline: Clarify Your Message. Connect With Your People.
Subheadline: A free mini-course for creators who want to stand out and speak clearly
Opt-in section with email capture (connected to ConvertKit)
3-Part Overview of the Course Modules
Brief About Jamie section with headshot
Testimonials or quotes from past clients (I’ll supply 2)
CTA: “Start the Free Mini-Course”
Thank You page design with video embed placeholder
Visual Direction:
Clean, open layout with layered text and soft motion elements
Colors: Light neutral background, coral and teal accents, black text
Fonts: Soft modern sans serif, rounded edges preferred
Vibe: Friendly, bright, and polished
Let me know if you need any extra content, links, or tech details.
Files:
(Attachments would typically include her photo, testimonials, course outline, and logo. Listed here for context.)
MK
Murad Kakish
May 30, 2025 11:46 PM
The first draft of your Magnetic Messaging landing page is ready for review. You can view it at the link below:
View Draft Page
This page was built directly in your WordPress site and follows the structure we discussed:
Hero section with your headline, subheadline, and call-to-action
Email opt-in form connected to ConvertKit
Three-module overview with supporting visuals
About section with your photo
Testimonials section
Final CTA and a custom Thank You page with video placeholder
Let us know if you’d like any changes to layout, copy, visuals, or links. Once we receive your approval, we’ll schedule the page to go live.
Looking forward to your feedback.
FL
Firstname Lastname
May 30, 2025 11:46 PM
Hi Team,
Thanks for sending this over. I just reviewed the draft and I’m really happy with how it turned out.
The layout is clean and easy to follow, the colors feel exactly on brand, and the opt-in section flows naturally. I especially love the way the course modules are laid out—simple but visually engaging.
A couple of very small edits:
Could we slightly increase the padding around the testimonial section for better spacing on mobile?
On the Thank You page, please update the placeholder text to say “Your free mini-course is on the way. Check your inbox for access details.”
Other than that, everything looks great. Once those tweaks are in, I’m happy for the page to go live.
Thanks again for your excellent work on this.
MK
Murad Kakish
May 30, 2025 11:47 PM
Thanks for the quick review and helpful notes.
We’ve made the final adjustments:
Increased the padding around the testimonial section for better mobile spacing
Updated the Thank You page message to read: “Your free mini-course is on the way. Check your inbox for access details.”
The updates are now live on the draft page. Feel free to give it one last look here:
View Final Draft
If everything looks good to you, we’ll move forward with publishing the page.
Let us know if you need anything else before we push it live.
FL
Firstname Lastname
May 30, 2025 11:47 PM
Hi Team,
Just reviewed the final draft and everything looks perfect. The spacing adjustments make a big difference on mobile and the updated Thank You message is spot on.
You’re all set to publish the page.
Thanks again for your thoughtful work on this project. It’s been such a smooth process and I really appreciate the care you put into every detail.
Looking forward to the next one.
Murad Kakish
May 30, 2025 11:47 PM
Glad to hear your request has been taken care of.
I'll go ahead and close this ticket. You can always find your previous tickets on your dashboard at mybrandpackage.com/portal
Ticket Details
Assignee |
Admin My Brand Package |
Category |
Web Design |
Status |
closed |
Created |
May 31, 2025 |